I Like the look of this double page spread as it is clearly aimed ata younger auidence. i like the use of the space on the left as space gives off a sense of freedom and luxury. as for the right side i feel there is way too much happening and too much text. this in my opinion would put readers off as they probably dont want to read masses off information.

i will make sure too keep the space in my magazine and keep text to a minimum also avoiding grouping it together.